this is something where I'd only read the free chapters but nothing more, I know sometimes you get tired and don't wanna right things out fully, but still using "ur" or "u" to replace "your" or "you're" is awful, it shows a lack of interest and effort in a story. I think if you could write down your ideas and then slowly form them into one single thought. This would be good. but right now, it feels like a 6 years old just rambling on about one of their fantasy's skipping from idea to another. Also, the power scaling is horrendous. he already reached rank one at just 18 chapters in and can suddenly move at the speed of light. Make sure you edit it. Don't just post right after writing it. Actually, read your stuff out loud so you don't sound like a 6 year old.
