The Alpha's Luna and the Bloodmoon Amulet - Reviews

"I understand. In this case, this is were we say goodbye...  Please be careful," miss Long tried not to cry no more as she looked back at ZhenZhu, "take good care of her."

Species: royal mermaid, fey

The muscular man flexed his muscles and sucked in the ash filled air.

As he took out his keys and unlocked his wooden door. After which he entered and sat down on his bed, as he started to check out his system that came out of nowhere. As he thought how to call the system out a voice sounded out that only he could hear.

Happy: What's your usual rate?

Honestly, I like the story, the problem I have is how it's written. It's very hard to read this. When someone talks try surrounding the text with " instead of adding an - in front of the message. But overall, I like the rest of it. Solid characters and world-building. I recommend this story if you re-write it.

love this book so so much , the author should keep on doing the most?❤

Quality is supreme its like a modern sci-fi book. I can tell a lot of thought was put in every chapter to almost great detail. I got absorbed in reading it. Its full of thought and very well explained like a real published book that you can take from a shelf and expect a good story. Love the subtle humor in it as it doesn't feel forced. Maybe I'm overpraising it. However, It's still early to say anything as this is only the first few chapters In. Hope this quality still retains even after a lot of chapters. Amazing start, don't blunder it now.