Technomancer of Marvel - Reviews

really nice novels, it started at a really nice pace, he has really good powers, which might not add anything to his arsenal for immediate combat, but well the current year is 2002 so no need for that too, but the potential his power has is tremendous, he also uses his brain very nicely, all in all, its a really good novel, and has really good potential.

Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5)
Fondo de mundo (2/5)

Evaluation: Below Average

WQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5

SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5

CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5

US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5

WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5

Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Author is obsessed with putting Dcu elements and characters in MCU. It’s honestly a bit of a waste. The powers have potential, and the MC uses them like someone who just got his powers. I like that he isn’t instantly OP.

this is a great story so far, I love where this is going. the writting is good love how you intigrated Bruce Wayne's character into the story. although, how are you going to do his background as you know SHEILD is going to run so many checks on him.

could have been better













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I currently finished all of the chapters as of October 19th, 2021. This story is absolutely incredible and has a lot of potential if updates are continued. The only issue is the stability of updates and besides that, everything is amazing.