In general I like the story quite a lot and I feel that there could be a lot of potential. But one thing the author needs to work on keeping uniformity to his writing. it's really confusing and irritating when there is no consistency to when the characters are speaking and thinking, sometimes they speak under "" sometimes it's BOLD and in the recent chapters it seems they are speaking after - If there was some uniformity in that like "" for dialogue and '' for monologue and thoughts it would be way easier to read. Hopefully the author would change it in the upcoming chapters so that I can come back and edit my review.
