Overall great story! However there are a few problems such as grammar mistakes. But tbh its not that much of a big deal. Although i do have a few problems with the character development. This is just my personal preferences but i just wish Ace(MC) had more freedom...instead of his grandmother controlling him/making his decisions every single time. I mean I understand that he is young, therefore you might have limited his freedom...but his IQ and EQ is astronomically high so he should be more mature than others anyways....Another thing is that his grandmother has all the power and authority but i just wish she had a better personality...I only read until ch35 so i may be wrong but the mc's only parent seems to be his grandmother why is she being so manipulative. *This is just my personal preferences so flame me if you want, but i wont change my mind on this. Anyways You do you Mr Author. I'm just one of the many readers you had, but i'm afraid i'll be dropping this novel. Peace out ma dudes!
