Carla instantly turned around to me. We were already inside headquarters and we were the only three in the room. Carla chucked Tobias at the wall causing him to lay still on the ground. I took a step away from her as she started to approach me.
The Asian man walked in, a black tuxedo neatly wrapped around his muscular body, and a golden lion cane in his hand. He had flowing black hair, his beard slowly turning white.
This story has a good start and good potential. I really hope mc doesn’t give up on his revenge and carries it out in a very brutal fashion. Also hope he doesn’t get saved by others and survives dangers due to his own skills
This is quite a good read, it is adventurous, mysterious, sometimes funny and it has a lot of action, sometimes drama, twists and overall a fun pack of everything you want, as a story and has potential. Keep going!
