Taehyung ff- When he slaps you - Reviews

"My body felt tired after the attack and look like the shotgun draw much magic power from my body. I calculate that I can only release another two from this weapon" said him with pondering.

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'Time to farm then.' Zachary put the back back and left the library once more. He snuck into the armory and grabbed a sword, then snuck back out. He left the property and ventured into the forest.

Good

I took only a step out of the lift and the doors closed behind me. He on the other hand casually walked inside and threw his jacket on the couch and headed straight to a room. With him no longer in sight, my heart that was completely stiff and stuffy, relaxed a bit. I took a toll to inspect this apartment.

Since he is a beginner, he was placed in tutorial mode. After completing the tutorial and familiarizing his consciousness to sync with his virtual avatar, he was transferred to an open field.

"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.

i think plot is good .but story progression is too artificial and forced   ,i get that you want character to be mysterious but every character felt too cringed. you should improve your writing quality . it seems like you want to write in detail but forced to shorten them which make it bad .