System: Game World - Reviews

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Hello, it's the author ! Just here to let you know that I'm writing this novel for fun. I'm a new author so please be gentle. I plan to release about 1-2 chaps per week.

PS: I'm also not a native English speaker/writer.
PS2 : For the ones who give 1 stars for nothing and insult me. JUST don't read it.
+ I don't have the money to pay an editor/not important enough to get one from Qidian.

heya author good work just dont become like others dropping their novels and using lame excuses just say you wont post for how long and just say if its drop so the readers wont wait for update

** i like your work

es buena historia entretenida es buena para leer el personaje principal esta bien hecho los secundarios como la hermana del prota les falta un poco de seguimiento pero son buenos

por favor si el protagonista es de harem que no sea denso

muchas gracias

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From the sypnosis down to the real deal chapters of this book was hella great! From the way you write every chapters, I'm amaze! Keep up the good work! It was nice to read your book❤❤

Hey there!

Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

Nice........  
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Different

weak to strong I like this story quite entertaining also has that kind of system like the Commanding Wind and Cloud and lacks a bit of development in the real world but in general this is very derarrolla to the character as the sister and the characters of the real life.

this of my personal taste but please that it is not a dense protagonist that if a girl likes of the same one if it does not like that it rejects it and if it likes that it accepts that it is all

thanks for an entertaining novel

Great one....
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Hope it 'll b long run......
Expect many more