Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.
In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .
The writing quality needs some work but not too bad honestly, story development is pretty good and immersive, best fictional fanfic I've read so far.I highly suggest this for Warhammer fans and all readers out there.
