It shows promise. The story has a good foundation so far. The main issues I have with it are that multiple paragraphs are frequently repeated copy-paste right next to eachother or at the start of a new chapter, and that in my opinion there is a lot of focus on earth, despite it being essentially ants compared to the void fleet. I get the whole make a good impression on the people of earth and stuff, but I feel like it doesn’t need as many chapters (that’s personal opinion, others may feel differently)
