Surviving In This Filthy World As A Novel Villain - Reviews

This is a story that the author spent months researching. Set in the Victorian era, the author strives to make it an epic masterpiece. Actual factual tidbits from the real world are weaved into this steampunk world.There is rich world building with characters and their personalities fleshed out perfectly. However... Maybe it's best not to get too tied to the characters...The development of the mystical elements are very well planned, with 220 classes. Imagine the richness that will bring!Many things are foreshadowed in this story, so look out for that!As translator, I will try to make sure the release rates are high.

Atleast he must do something to convince them to tell him the adress of Lilian.

"Sorry Mia, I got to go, I just like her okay, I just was to date her because I like her, do I need to give you a more simpler way to say it," I said while walking away towards the ending.

Meanwhile ..... In one VIP room.

"Is everything okay?" His tone became worried. The sudden change in his voice cause Arianna to smile slightly.

The girl is gasping for her last breath, her eyes rolls behind her head, suddenly a kitchen knife is jammed right on her necks, blood splatters  all over the redhead girls scared face, her father falls down and is instantly killed, Jake is seen holding a bloody knife, "Mira," He runs to her and hugs her tightly, all he wanted to do was protect the girl he loved from her abusive father, she starts crying even more. If Jake wasn't here then Mira would have been choked to death by her father. Her face was all red and veins exploded out from her forehead. She cries on Jake's shoulders and holds him tightly.  "This world needs to be cleansed, all evil must die," Jake holds Mira's even tighter and thinks about all the people he has loved die. But he wouldn't let Mira die, he wouldn't let anyone else die.

"a-ah i guess this is a slow song." i stated, not knowing what to say as yeonjun put his arms on my waist.

interesting IAM going to add this to my library

I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing?

well, this book was really good and captivating till the time both leads were in the mountains.. the plot after is just like all over the place.. vampire thing does not suit at all.