surviving in a fantasy world: love with the alpha - Reviews

"You know, if you are trying to get me to work for you, you should stop calling me that. It's Gabe."

Ma gives us her scolding look." Just once in me life" she says, " I'd like to see a bite of food go direct from the dish into somebody's mouth without detour of any kind".She's looking at me when she says it.thought.  It isn't that I don't like fried rabbit. Like it fine. I just don't want to bite down on buckshot, that's all, and I'm checking each piece. "I looked thats rabbit over good, Marty and you won't find any buckshot in that  thigh

My mother used to say that people who couldn't fulfill their last wish become a star ,but a star which shines the brightest is a star that must've been a really good person in their past life .

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

This novel is good yet repetitive and annoying.. to much water ..so much thing irrelevant to the story and a stupid mc.1 star is too much for this

Really nice job author!Plus I don’t think it’s a bad thing for you to review on your own book but overall well done!Keep up the good work!

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I've read about 70 chapters.... where's the omniscient part of the novel or where is the wisdom that MC supposed to have...to me it looks like another power leveling novel with Fake title

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Loving it ya , update are kinda low but still it keeps you anticipating for more ya . Loving the plot looking forward to what the author as in mind ya . Loving it

I absolutely adore what is here so far. So I decided to post this review in hopes the author can update faster. While I'm not sure if this deserves 5 full stars I’m sure it’s close. So I’m willing to scrape up the extra points. The world building I feel like is the only somewhat lacking part of the novel. With that being said, there’s only a few chapters here so far. I’m willing to bet by chapter 5 that will cease to be the case.Now I’ll point out the parts I love. The writing style is absolutely amazing in this novel but I recognize it might not suit everyone’s taste.It’s very descriptive but the descriptions are short and to the point. Plentiful, but concise. It’s also amazing at building an environment, yet some people prefer more attention to immediate action or dialogue. I can say those points are not lacking. The dialogue has never felt flat to me, although the god could have been given a bit more care, everything else is perfect. It’s never generic, and the characters also stay consistent while still being given depth. I believe as long as this style is kept and is not changed due to negativity, and the story stays unique and immersive. This can hit top 10. I have faith

I love this because I feel like I can relate to the MC a lot, as a girl myself, I know if I turned into a guy? and a HOT one? I'd either get topped or be the top! No in between. Good job, author!!