The pacing in these chapters is absolutely ruthless and I respect it so much.
We open at the banquet, and the author makes you FEEL every excruciating minute of it. 'After enduring for an hour, the banquet finally reached its conclusion.' ONE HOUR. The author could have summarized this in a paragraph but chose to make us sit through the formal speeches, the tedious toasts, the awkward silences between Xia Zhi and Pei Yuexuan. Why? Because the suffocation makes the release so much more satisfying.
Then—bam—we're in the ladies' lounge, gossiping about a 'super handsome waiter,' and the tone shifts completely. Light, casual, almost comedic. Xia Zhi and Bai Jiyue are just two friends chatting, and you think everything is fine. Then Xia Zhi opens a door on the fourth floor and the genre changes. The pacing here is like a rollercoaster that drops without warning.
The scene with Xie Ning and Tang Yun is where the tension becomes almost unbearable. Tang Yun's dialogue is so disgustingly over-the-top that you're physically recoiling, and then Xie Ning's response—'Alright... first help me... take off the handcuffs'—is a masterclass in controlled pacing. He's drugged, he's tied up, he's in danger, and he's playing along. The reader holds their breath. The prose slows down. Every word feels weighted.
And then just as we're at peak tension, Xia Zhi bursts in and the scene shifts again. The author never lets you settle, never lets you get comfortable, and that's exactly why I can't put this down. The structure moves from social suffocation to romantic tension to life-or-death danger, and each transition feels earned, not rushed.