Subordination system - Reviews

a fun read !






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Honestly one of the best things that i have read in a while. The pacing it slow but it all makes sense. The characters are likeable for the most part. Some answers are missing but I think that is on purpose. Keep up the good work I am looking forward to reading more ^_^

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Loved the story just read it all in one go love the work. We need more chapters and world background needs to be developed and needs some work otherwise it's a good read

Great at least for now. The writing could improve, but it's not too bad. The big problems come from the way the author handles the speech and the quotations marks that go with it. In terms of character design and world background, these are temporary scores which are bound to change later.