Stuck in the Prologue - Reviews

"I'm ready, I'm ready, its time to start my journey!" I hummed as I woke up filled with Energy.

Ability: [Extra Arms]☆

" I am fine and hope you are too and i  am really sorry but i am kind of running late so we will catch up later i will visit you all soon but my brother's waiting outside and i am already late soo.... i hope you don't mind about my behaviour right now because i know i am looking a little arrogant and you know..

As it was getting dark Zuko made his way down to the healers huts to receive his treatment and to liberate a certain girl from her village. Yes liberate because he is righteous and he cannot do something as Petty as kidnap. The reason why he is doing this? Easy her talent was being wasted here he still remembered how she pulled water out of the air instantly such control even him as a fire bender understood the precision this took to accomplish but women aren't allowed to learn how to fight here unlike in the fire nation where women are encouraged to be warriors.

Pada saat di kelas dua ada suatu perubahan dengan suasana dan tingkah laku teman-temannya yang sedikit ketularan nakal dan terkotor setelah bergabung dengan kakak kelas C.Kakak kelas C yang tegolong nakal,kotor,paling jijik di sekolahnya.

"Awooooo~" A deep howl reverberated quitely from a ways yonder.

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And all that glitters is gold

It's good start and hope it will be a great work.

Has some flaws here and there and sometimes plays to much into cliches, but It's overall an enjoyable read with a good amount of potential I also like how the MC is currently adapting to his situation (even if it wasn't always the best to get into it). Theirs also a constant push towards some other side characters which is nice. It also starts to stand out more from others that start like it as the story goes on In a way that I really appreciate.

Wow, another gem on WN, a write which is different from those greasy cliche... and perfect rom-com... hehe I am gonna follow it, keep uploading more chaps I don't wanna to wait

I like the first two chapters of the story; they really pique my interest, the MC is quite likable, and his emotions feel real. However, once he traversed into another world, his arrogance skyrocketed. The story is unique but too fast-paced; having a rebellion in just two chapters at most felt somewhat lacking. If I may suggest, try to explore your characters deeper; give them a background and their goals. Consider them your creations and let your readers have a proper understanding of the world. Do not just rely on MC reading thoughts. And I would like to ask the author, will the MC return to his previous world? I'm more interested in that than his current world.