While it’s a great parody,
But bad notes first, the novel gets more and more harem like, without having the tag, and I find myself losing interest as it does. I didn’t sign up for a harem. And the fact that he’s getting it one with his cousin not cousin…
I also had a problem with the sheer lack of important male characters. All the important ones are female. And any male characters are unexplored footnotes, easily replaceable.This highlights the harem feel.
As a side note, the MC should lose sometimes. It adds depth to the character.
On the good notes, the novel has great promise. It really gives you perspective on power-levels without having to state it. You just get a feel for how strong people are and the potential out there.
Also, the world building is great so far, and it has solid character design as I can see. I want to see more. I want to see outside of just the school. I also can’t wait to see more political aspects being explored. Like a game of thrones feel.
Currently, I think the novel has some good pacing.
