Stepbrother! Stop being a thug! - Reviews

The guy finished his manga. He crumpled up the piece of paper that came with the burger. Instead of throwing the paper into the garbage, he set it on fire on his palm, and threw the ashes to the ground which scattered around the area.

Next day

「Eh, right now!?」

Iya nih mbak, si author cinta banget sama caca jadi dia di munculkan lagi jadi pengacau. Edwin masih mabuk kepayang jadi pengantin baru jadi lupa ngurus surat ke KUA, ntar pas caca mulai macem" lagi baru kelabakan deh si Edwin ngurus surat" ke KUA biar punya bukti surat nikah resmi tuk nunjukin klo dia sama Bila dah nikah resmi. Lanjut thor, di tunggu next chapternya...

Defending Stance;

Teiga: I could ask you scum the same thing.

Previously, Axel found a way to close the screens by mentally thinking 'close' with the intention to close the screens. After finding this out, he found the way to open the screens by instead thinking 'open'. After looking through the screens, only the mission screen changed.

Never!   Never!             Never!

"Oh okay, thats pretty clear."

5 star for another masterpiece i have read. It’s plot was ??????, the characters and everything especially Akari, I’m hooked. The way how Asahi and Fuyutsuki died early but still you showed us their strength despite dying. The bestx??????

THIS MC IS THE STRONGEST CHARACTER I HAVE EVER SEEN LOL

Off to a great start! Waiting to hear more.