This story started off great with the hostile attitudes, but 94 chapters in and three attempted murders with Kayden not caring or Crystal not reacting to the seriousness has me rethinking if I want to continue spending money on a story that is dragging along.
This book started ok, but it became nonsense. Apart from all the unrealistic twists, there are so many grammar issues. It really needs proofreading. But, this isn't the only book with this problem.
