The story shows promise, but the linearity of the story is confusing. Characters are introduced and then forgotten quickly. The story itself is confusing and bounces around constantly, especially with the time skips and changes development. Like what happened with his sister or Emerald? why did they just stop being mentioned? What about the rest of his family? Who the hell is Xavier, and why did he get a single mention in a chapter and then never get explained? The story has promised, but it seems like it's steam rolling forward with no linear progression or sense.
