very good writing quality that could be further enhanced by changing how you write his thoughts,world background much known but nothing bad presently, character design is very good just needs more depth.
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"We'll see when we meet them. It's going to be soon, the finals are next week and there's little time to prepare. I daresay it'll be quite hard for them, depending on their proficiency though."
-No one has even managed to control the Rur Clans before- This time it was Beraka, this was something he did understand, much to well -There has always been rivalry between us, and old grudges. I am sorry Liutenant but that is not something we want.
