SOLIVARA: The Last Hope - Reviews

Not gonna lie this novel needs a lot a lot I mean a lot of improvement from grammar, story construction,character and overall.TBH I just write this novel in one sitting or if am bored without carefully checking it. Well am not expecting this work of mine to be great this is my first written work anyways. Also I hope I can finish this work while am studying. I be gald to make this novel to become my companion in the upcoming years and if i ever make  new work it be a improve one. Wish me good luck.  (>0) - PeneP.S if your wondering why no yuri even its yuri tag don't worry its be in the future ehehehehe. That tag is a confirmation that ML will have a hardtime winning her heart.(Well she have some complicated history)

Not only that . But I also found Eleanor Calder , the girl I was 'dating' , giving out fake information about me and her .

Aku menganggukkan kepalaku.

"What are you doing out? I told you to stay in your room until noon!" She scolded, but not in a mean way. She said it in the nicest way you could scold.

Just as we get to the bank teller we hear a gun shot and turn to see six-armed gun men with heavy duty guns come in and yell, "This is a bank robbery so get down and stay calm and everyone will be fine. We just want the money not anyone's lives, so no one try to be a hero and the body count will not rise." My eyes narrow as I think this is the Parker luck kicking in. A couple hours into the hostage standoff I try to get one of the robbers to take me to the bath room, so I can suit up and take these guys out.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

yooo author here kinda shameless to be commenting on your own book but here we go.I’m writing for fun and I have a really fun imagination. My writing schedule is so bad right now? but it will be fixed! Can’t wait to show you the boys adventures!Below is a picture of what Shirley and Tucker look like (or SOB442, TFR100 if you still don’t know) Shirley is the kid in shorts and with dirty blonde hair and Tucker is the kid with white hair

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