So I finished reading this story until the last chapter (Ch 9)First of all, first two chapters could use a little of Max monologue (just a little). His world seemed silent to me. I feel disconnected with MC in the first chapter.I love how the author trying to describe the sadness of losing someone, it's heartbreaking I'd give points to that. But I wish in that moment we could also know more what he was thinking..his feelings..maybe try to show how the deep connection he has with his brother in the first two chapters..But... from ch 3, then that's when it gets interesting. To me the story fly after this chapter. So if you plan on reading, don't give up on the first two, cause you won't be disappointed, cause I didn't. Overall, this is a diamond in the rough. Yes it needs polishing, but if u ask me is it worth reading? My answer: Yes.
