this book is simply amazing, I usually wouldn't read these sort of books but this one has me hooked right from the first chapter! l would love to see more of it ❤️
I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.
This is my first time reading this kind of book. The first 5 chapters has me laughing. I see the humor in your words and the world building is good as its progresses. Keep it up and looking foward to reading more from you
wow. good introduction and the explanations were clear. also, i like the part that you were using the original sins devil names on the characters it makes it more interesting
The story has an interesting twist on the Devil's rivalry and lust's rise. Characters are unique, but pacing felt a bit uneven. Good for a change of pace in supernatural fiction.
First of all, the story has a grear theme obviously derived from the bible. I hope you execute it well, dear author! Very interesting to read. But I hope do something about paraphrasing. All in All a very good read
