Shattered Illusions... - Reviews

"What the hell happened?" Jessica demanded, looking around as several buildings had fallen either entirely or partially.

Before he can reach him the man uses the grey control panel hanging from his shoulder to release a red laser beam at Superboy. Strong enough to knock him back and to the parking surface on his back. Unmoving.

charechter development- pretty goodworld building- very detailed and i mean itmc personality- personally  i think its kainda unique this a hella nice read please author dont over work your self

This book has what it takes to reach the top.Quality: CheckConsistent Updates: CheckLikeable protagonist with clear flaws which can be fixed and developed on: Check.I must admit I was very impressed by the starting chapters. All that’s left is to maintain this quality and consistency.

Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something.First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person.Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things.The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump.This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes.Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it.Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.

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