Shadowborn: The Final Heir - Reviews

Tang Huai came to the county town, but did not go directly to the school, but to Gu Jiajia's house.

The Company of Laguna was made when the former beastkin kingdom was destroyed and absorbed into Agra. When his father Count Botwe invaded and conquered a good portion of the territory the king of Agra at the time offered a good chunk of the region to him and the rights to be the sole owner of the slaves.

There's 3 factors here that made the review 3.4. Firstly the story development, followed by the character design and world background. The introduction for the opening chapter was not that great of a start. I was expecting something to happen as he got into the woods but the author made it look very ordinary. Atleast put some stray animals there or something that could intrigue your readers. In concludsion, it was very normal, just a kid with superhuman strength. Some dialogue flows unnaturally. Most scenes was rushed. The cuts per chapter needs a lot of improvement. Character design, there was nothing unique, plain and simple. World background... this is the most lacking. The story can be waited out for about 20-30 more chapters before the final verdict.

Definitely a unique story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading