Shadow Over the Amazon - Reviews

I decided to absorb his body in order to not be chased by the cops. Not that I feared them anymore if I was going to Camp Half-Blood, but it would be annoying to be chased around everywhere.

The sudden creak of a classroom door snapped him back to reality. In front of him stood a young male teacher who looked to be in his late twenties or early thirties. Compared to Mr. Shirley, he actually dressed quite well. He wore a white dress shirt which was tucked into a pair of navy dress pants, along with a suit jacket of a similar colour. The whole outfit was accompanied by a blood red tie and, oddly enough, red converses to match. He had short brown hair, which was parted in the centre which made him look like some kind of Korean actor. This was further reinforced by the fact that he was actually Asian as well.

I didn't know how long as if I just fell asleep, I was woken up.

On the other side of the wall Katrina, the knights and Princess Juliette were all engaged in a heated discussion. "Katrina surely you have noticed the amazing charm that is overflowing from Lord Alyster, have you not? Such an amazing figure, those strange and yet beautiful eyes and hair, and don't get me started on how cool he looks when he is fighting!" This was said by one of the three knights named Jessica. She has golden eyes, and long golden hair, with a flawless figure and the perfect size of breasts in many men's eyes. Katrina looked at her with a cherry red face and didn't say anything. Then the two other knights began to speak as well. "Yes she is correct Katrina! I can't calm down knowing that just on the other side of this wall, Lord Alyster is completely naked! If only there was some way that we could observe him without him being able to see us!" The second knight who spoke was named Helena. She has crimson red eyes, and red hair that is back in a ponytail. Finally the last knight named Seria, who has orange eyes and orange hair gave her opinion as well. "Yeah he is great, but have any of of you noticed how he doesn't seem to be that effected by our looks? The Princess is the most beautiful woman in the kingdom, and I dare say that we are only a few places below her in our assets, and our beauty."  Princess Juliette was simply smiling and nodding along with everything that the girls had to say. She suddenly began to speak her mind as well, and oh boy was it a bombshell. "Indeed he is incredible. Unparalleled under the heavens, and I dare say even in the heavens as well. It is my intent to court him after I bring him to my father. Should you also decide that you wish to be with him as well, then I have no qualms in regards to this. After all, I see you girls as my best friends; even as my sisters though we share no blood."

"Sir, she lie"Lucio try to clear this misunderstanding

My hand moved automatically and I dodged him before decking him using his own weight.

And all that glitters is gold

"Forests don't move sir. If it was a forest fire it would eventually get bigger, these are bits of light set in a long line moving towards us." Perhaps not the best way to build a reply, but how else would he describe this?

"Carl, you killed your own parents."

the twist with the "system" is a cool idea and the writing is good, the pacing is good except the 3 first chapters. so far i recommend trying it (ch13)

Awesome write, I enjoyed it, awesome dialogue, really good world setting and its compelling enough to hook me right from the start, will add it to library, just keep uploading more for the sake of my curiosity please

I haven't read school or student base novel in so long, the first chapter overwhelmed me by the long chapter haha, my fault. anyways I liked it the plot is solid alright! lets read more!