I think this is one of the webnovels that is going to be really, really popular very soon. Clean, clear writing for the most part and the pacing is spot-on in the goldilocks zone of giving enough detail to be tantalizing without being overwhelming. Also, has a lot of forward momentum with the pacing and leaving hooks at the end of chapters. I'm a sucker for world-building and not-OP MC, so this is exactly the type of read that will hook me.
One writing habit to keep an eye on is duplication of transition words within sentences (such as using 'But' to lead-off the sentence, and then also as the midpoint), and keeping up variability with modifiers.
I'm glad I found this one now, because there is enough content to binge-read in the coming weeks. :)