As of chapter 9: A very good story so far. Slow build up in the first couple of chapters but it really kicks into high gear after that initial development. Very good choice of descriptors and good character development make it clear how their personalities dictate their actions. I'm generally not a usual reader of romance, but I can't deny good writing when it's present. If any critique, I'd say there are some issues with switching between past and present tense, making it a bit jarring on first read, but it's not a major problem for those willing to overlook it. I look forward to future chapters!