secondary character - Reviews

Age 16

"… Morning…?"

"Hey" he smiled with a joyful smile spread across his face.

Perhaps I'm not giving this one enough of a chance, but I don't know if I really want to.  Face slapping is just not for me.  I want character development (or at least an interesting growth in power that feels like it's earned) and meaningful relationships that also grow or progress in some way.This story gives you a flat, arrogant, "flawless" MC who is already too powerful from the start leaving him little room to grow.  If you think this story is about "crafting" you would be wrong.  It's about an insanely powerful mage (with his rate of magical growth in the first few chapters, it's obvious) who can already craft anything he wants.  The only thing we ever learn about characters other than MX is how they think about MC.  None of them have a speck of personality or individuality.However, I did only read about 30 chapters, so...

"karena ayah adalah lading keberkahan, lading rezeki dan tempat nya rida dan restu dari tuhan.."

Feigning oblivion, Wu Mei inquired whether they had been in the car the whole time whilst bearing a red layer across her face. Awkwardly, they all pretended as if they weren't in an attempt to prevent Wu Mei from feeling embarrassed.

Guru agama : "Terus kenapa kamu gak berdiri?"

So much to do, so much to see

Love the Character! Love the Story! Love the Author! You deserve 5 stars. At least in addition to the power stone, this is what I can do, the spirit of writing!

Is there smut scenes in this??? Cause I’ve come for the smut

Amazing has always the story, the characters development. Honestly is incredible how unpredictable the story will be from here! Can’t wait to see how Kiyotaka would assist his new class and Ichinose class to compete at the same level with Horikita class. Especially now that Koenji’s father has motivate Koenji to use his full ability to stay in class A. Also reminder that Kiyotaka has resumed his physical training to restore his full strength.

This novel is incredible! The world-building pulls you in completely, the characters’ emotions feel so real, and the dialogue flows naturally. The detailed descriptions make it easy to picture every scene, and you can really feel Calum’s pain and unbreakable determination.  I can’t recommend this enough—it’s a must-read!