Saving the ruined Knights' Order - Reviews

Kuroka's lips thinned. "And what makes you think it would be that easy?"

I tried to sit up and guess what, I had a headache, great!

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

The Pokemon League works as a bridge between the seller and the buyer, thus maintaining anonymity and being able to maintain knowledge of the sales flow in the underworld.

The story was very good and the character design is awesome ,it is very hard to translate the story but with a lot of effort you made it .my small request is to make the story some more interesting and attractive so the people will still get attached to the story . Hope you will make it ????

It’s my first experience with a  gacha system mechanic in a story and I wasn’t sure about it. But what pulls me in is the character development. The characters are interesting and I learn more about them as we go along and as the protagonist grows. The first Lord battles were very satisfying: it was close; surprises on the enemy side kept it exciting as the mc didn’t just easily overpower.

It's a nice story but you should ensure you update it weekly at least one or two chapters a week it increases on chances of getting a contract

A lead in to your standard rich guy good girl romance story. It's up to a very good start. Plot is consistent and the characters are relatable.