Other than a proofreader or a little more self editing not much else to do but really I only spot 1 or 2 mistakes/misspellings that don't really affect much. Overall it is very well done and a great read.Grammarly extension may help to but again these are really minor mistakes hardly worth mentioning. However if it was me I would have wanted to know. Once again keep up the great work I look forward to the next chapter.