Rural Doctor Enters the City: Whoever Touches My Wife, I'll Take Them Down! - Reviews

Se agacho a sobarse.

"Carson want to go for a quick flight?"

Hearing someone sighing, Miyuki focused her attention on the person that came in. Only to be surprised a little as he saw Cram. She stopped what she was doing and greeted him.

"No, no, no, there must be some other reason for this. "Yan Xiangma denied the argument that Li Muyang is a fool. "But smart people are good, I like interacting with smart people, they know and understand the meaning behind words and situations, don't you think? "

'Jack' you're like those system in novels' jack said with an excited new voice ]

Rika looked at Shizuka, who said, "Rika these are not bad kids. I don't know why they felt the need to do this, but we can at least listen to them."

Wayyyyyyyy to short

"Dude, what's wrong? You saw something?" He asked.

Oto: (bows down picking his backpack) that is one  advantage of being a pro fashion designer.

Captivating story plot. I enjoyed the few chapters I read and definitely giving this my time ?

I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.

At first I really needed to get use to the structure in what this novel is written, but my God, this novel is so good. You can easily see the time the author has invested in her charcters and world background. one thing I love the most, are the images the author had place here and there. To mean they seem like little treats from the author to her readers. Very well done!