Rune Keeper - Reviews

"Sekarang dia seorang diri, apa kau akan tetap meninggalkannya?" gadis itu tidak memberikan jawaban. Ia masih menatap Sehun, kerutan pada keningnya menunjukkan bahwa ia menginginkan penjelasan. "ayahmu sudah tiada." jelas Sehun. Mendengar itu kontras membuatnya terduduk lemah dilantai. Air mata yang sedari tadi ia tahan kini mengalir bebas dari matanya. "hanya kau dan ibumu yang ia punya."

The area seemed to heat up in accordance to Ares's words, the ground beginning to blister and crack like the earth of a savannah.

Bringing up both of her hands, Kurihara-san began to run and throw the bear ornaments towards the window.

"Ang dami mo nang nakain, Mart. Tataba ka nyan." Sita sa kanya Jakob nang umupo na rin ito sa tabi nila.

Jennie : Because you are rich and you only eat fancy food how come you know this kind of food ?

Lumina : if we finished the mission, our reward will be food. But if we don't complete it with in three hours we will get punished.

"Anyway, don't you think the weather's been odd recently?" I said before I stuffed some of the food I prepared this morning.

- Sentences using conjunctions like 'and' many times are examples of those that could be split up.

"Try?" - Takashi raised his eyebrows at the same time as a sign of surprise at what was previously requested by Mr. Takagi.

Xu Mingyun stares at Zhong Cheng with her wide golden eyes.

Excellent story with a growing mc.  It has a sci-fi futuristic setting yet with the mc that is  arrogant. Enemies aren't braindead as people at least talk as if they are people but still not so complex