Rose Rain - Reviews

Then from the shadows, the imp came, its singular eye glowing an ominous pale blue. It inched closer to the boy prepared to bash his skull in. He reached Rei and raised his arm, prepared to have tonight's dinner, smiling to himself as he imagined the taste of human flesh.

Lumapit ako dito at nagpaalam "Dad, I'm sorry but I need..."

She then put her gaze at Heiki who was busy attaching wooden cases on the back of what appeared to be a large wyvern with green scales.

The Eternal Ice Palace was forbidden to men and naturally, the Eternal Ice Palace consisted of only women.

"Um, well you see, the Be Gone is an invention that solves the trash epidemic in one fall swoop."

Matoshiki Uchiha

The teacher entered the class shortly after and everybody sat down on their seats. "Good morning everyone. Today is a different day from the usual, as some of you can tell. We have a new member in our class. Everybody welcome Noah Price to the class." Soon after the students softly clapped for Noah. "Good morning to everyone today. I am Noah, I hope all of us can get along throughout the year." Said Noah uninterested on the class. He took a seat close to the the center of the class, his eyes  never left the girl right beside the window she kept reading her book with the window slightly opened, making her beautiful blonde hair flutter softly.

Romeo bends to do a deep bow, but then realizes that he was still holding the princess. He had a moment of great difficulty if what to do, those around him noticed his troubles, especially the king.

"I was looking for potential wives for him anyway and those two will serve nicely in that regard, he is someone who deserves a prize after all. He did things to help the Empire flourish, so you better not try anything against him while you remain a deadman."

Suddenly before their eyes the whole factory area disappeared leaving behind dust.

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Está decente, me recuerda a Shadow Slave, tanto en el mundo, las criaturas, niveles de poder de los humanos, etc. El desarrollo de personajes deja mucho que desear, pero no está en un nivel malo. Aparte de esto, siento que la historia avanza demasiado rápido y no hay momentos en los que puedas comprender la situación sin que esta cambie en menos de un segundo.