Rise Of The World's Greatest Villain - Reviews

(well not yet there are still 9 months practically but you don't have wait for that long, just for the next chapter)

"It was probably caused by her

The normal people, as the Mages called them, were satisfied with this system, or that's what they just said to not induce the wrath of the Mages. It was just too dangerous for a normal person to oppose a Mage. And that was a problem that most chose to ignore.

(captain):- Hume intzar karna hoga (victor) hamla kare.

A minute later the older kids left, Most likely Bored from hitting me.

"I'm tired, lets just go to home."

"Okay-okay, now number 3 here, how many human toxid children are on this earth," I said.

I normally don't give reviews to translations, but I am compelled to tell that this NBA fanfic translations is perhaps the only honored one, when it comes to NBA fanfiction.The goat Bloodrunk not only emits out a lot of the usual stuff you generally see in CN fics, but also adds their own spin, like TNT, explanations on in-game terminology, and really funny trash-talking. There is much more, but I mainly focus on these few points which not only adds depth to the original story, but really elevates the story as something unique.Yes, it does become cliche that the MC, Han Sen wins majority of the time, or uses foreknowledge to benefit himself, or really just continues to rage bait into oblivion, but this is part of the identity that the novel evokes. The only issue? Waiting for more chapters. I can wait so long as the good. But honestly, I blitzed this in 2 days, and woke up the next morning just to read this till my phone died. TLDR: just faking read it.

I am le author. I need your help. I want to be better at writing narratives, so please, please, read it and tell me what I could do better, you don't need to give me anything, not even a review, just comments telling me about my short comings, I'm only human.

I am in tears?? I never cry easily but kudos to author who made me cry and kept me so hooked up with this book. Why can't I get more coins to unlock the chaps?

Pretty same Tone . The storyline is no doubt good but all chapter sounds same although this changes but the initial similar starting is misleading love the professor he is truly well made getting  manipulative vibes from him . If it's orgins then I guess it will take time to come to main storyline

I've only read up to chapter 1, and I really hate Darren, ahahahah, but I'm curious about how the main character will develop, and considering he's handsome, will he get more handsome as time goes by?