Rise of The Undead Legion - Reviews

stopped at chaps 104, overall it's pretty good for now. will talk more it in detail.

romance : right now i don't see much except lone arrow, who anyone in their right mind can think that she's only there for fun so there's probbly won't be anytime soon.

action/fights : it's a face paced for the fights so you can see that it dont extend to over 5+ chaps

worldbuilding : well uh so-so not good but not bad enough to start creating plot holes

the mc imo : compared to the tops, he's pretty alright, not that scheming or rash. all i can say while his iq looks like 5+ points higher than the average, he is actually have 6+ so thats cool

6.4/10 : a good read to past time but there's nothing spectacular about this novel, and there's nothing really engaging. Peace, i aint continuing ✌

lemme try this one, will be giving review after first 100 chaps. if its over 5 out of 10 will continue reading it

The story has a few major problems. A lot of name swapping where another name was used that didn't make any sense instead of the actual one. A lot of plotlines were incredibly warped, like he especially takes care that Lone never knows his name his Dave or anything. Give it a few chapters and suddenly she calls him Davey? The grammar was occasionally horrible too. The author needed 400 chapters to realize the infinitive of tired is tire and always wrote tier. So all in all uncomfortable to read but I liked the idea so I kinda read on. I'm done now. The end was unsatisfying in my opinion but what can you do. I don't really recommend it.

I got to chapter 60, I can't take it anymore.  Letting you film while you're chased around the world?  Give your items away?  Share personal skills and information?  Yes, you can do all this for a "cute" girl, f*ck.  fluffy is my egg

hundred percent agree that's why i don't believe "if someone throws you a stone then throw them back with bread" i also hate annoying fmc i wish i could eradicate that dumb mc and annoying bitch fmc

I do believe and try to uphold that sentence, of course while upholding the laws of justice and what's fair (punishment and reward)

But guess what? We play video games like GTA or read novels like these to see Mc b1tch slapping people who merely cursed him once to death, not to read about a saint.

A saint is, imho, objectively bad for fantasy novels because they are too passive. And a protagonist who is merely passive and reactive instead of active is just a straight recipe to losing reader attention.

o7 salute