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While noone hated them, beauty will always breed envy. And with envy comes jealosuy.

Seeing his mother for the first time, all Alex could think of was how beautiful she was: long auburn hair, silver eyes, fair skin and a loving aura. Right now her face was holding a warm smile, a smile that only a loving mother could show.

"I will do things that will make you hate me... I will do things that will make you question me... but... know, to never do that." He said as he stared at her... waiting for her response.

"Hey isn't that Hinata and a female Naruto," a girl asked  another student  the boy nodded  speechless

"I bet there won't be even  one light on the stone, he can't even cultivate that trash body of his, and yet he dares to go on stage"

It really a fun read, juts minor spelling mistakes which can be easily ignored, overall it's great read to improve mood and make you ? ? ?

Do you really have to keep the name Axel? It sounds odd when you read like Axel Lin? wth? Either use a full English name or a full Chinese name.

Mars is on Haitus, what can I complain when there are fan witting this to release my boredom?5/5 across the board, but nooooo, don't make me wait so long for next chapters