Reverend Peaksanity - Reviews

A sinister sound was heard, feeling the shift in tone Issei put his guard up as the winds began to increase and it's power sliced at him from each direction not harming him at all, but instead ripping off of his clothes exposing his bulky body causing even Arnold Schwarzenegger to vomit blood in comparison.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Admittedly, I didn't like how chapter 1 was written but it got better as the chapters progressed. Main character needs to have more personality. Overall the plot seems interesting  and it would be better if slight adjustments were made