The synopsis and the initial chapters show some potential for a good book. It is a nice concept. I believe it wil be quite entertaining. However, work on some grammatical issues. Keep on working on your story.
It is my first time reading a book like this, I tell you it's good. Imagene, a father doing everything he can for his daughter ❤️❤️❤️. Keep up the good work.
I have read a few chapters and all I could say is that this book is amazing. Few errors but nevertheless the story you are telling is clear. I would love to be updated on this. Keep up the good work
I love supportive parents. They literally give confidence and high self esteem to their kids. I especially love the father who is trying to make things right for his daughter. Wow! She is one lucky girl. Its
So far, this book is remarkably well composed. I love the story plot and how the characters are being described to the fullest. I'm really enjoying the story and will definitely be reading more of it. Great job author.
