Return to The Origin - Reviews

"Tick Tock Tick Tock." The boy beside her whispered. His hood was above his head as he repeated the words. She had already arrived at her High School, BCUA. As all the seats were taken in her first class of the day, she was forced to sit next to the strange boy who always had a hood on. Similarly, always a red one, the rumors would say.  Chunhua shuddered as he continued.

Delaware (Lenape)

Alex stuffed Elizabeth's soul inside his storage space. He started walking to them at a normal speed.

He met the girl and he does conversation for a quite long. Although there are some misunderstandings here and there, there is one thing that is certain. William now knew the girl's name.

Knock! Knock!

Only shooting stars break the mold

"Did you hear something?"

Haven’t read that far yet, but is seem interesting so far

The first chapter showed how weak men can be when it comes to a woman. Haha. Just joking. Well, it showed how stupid Isaac can be when it comes to a woman, which made some readers laugh and others feel sorry for him. But despite everything that happened to Isaac, I'm excited to see how he'll bounce back and get revenge on those who wronged him. This is what hooked me to follow this story. Nice job, author. So far, you are doing great.