'How the fuck did I wind up in space?' I would have screamed, but ... lack of oxygen and all. My lungs were already aching from the lack and my dismay at my imminent demise gave way to surprise at streaks at both edges of my peripheral vision that shot past me to where I could see them.
Honestly really nice.Besides the grammar errors, and the lack of dialogue (which is made up for by all the infor we're given), it has a really cool start.The author could try mixing all of the background information while advancing the plot though.
