This story just isn’t my type. A few descriptive phrases. I can name a million things I don’t like about this story; such as the names, Kyle’s mom and aunt hazel, the writing style, etc. however, what I do appreciate is the author’s effort to try something different from the norm and protest against gun violence. It takes a lot of courage to post your own work online. Although in my eyes the story is not the most interesting , I’m sure there will be the right people who would support your journey as an author.
