that's all to be reviewed, by reading the other review it's say in the novel MC is an adult but author say is 16 years old, and still act like child well maybe he is a child
Story is really good, but the author is definitely new to writing, as they say themself in like every little "author's comments" thing. The writing was a bit more clunky towards the beginning, but it's definitely gotten a little better later on.
Just fantastic and fabulous novel. The chapters sink in so great. Though it feels like the story hasn't taken a turn yet. It's calm. It makes me think that it is gonna be a long journey. Love ya.