reincarnated in the world of httyd with a summon system - Reviews

Robin turns to watch as the Fog Cloud behind him turns red before disappearing, The woman behind the counter breathes out a sigh of relief.

I logged back on and saw that my Eevee was the color of dry blood all except for it's black fur. Suddenly the game started glitching. I backed away from the screen but then, the Eevee came out too reality and said in a low voice, " I was waiting to long for you, now you join me!"

"Okay Doctor."

Literally the best thing I've read on the Internet. The character is well thought out, he has ambitions, and his personal life is also well shown

So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough.Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.