Okay so let me just start by saying the wedding scene in Chapter 18 is genuinely one of the most layered moments in this entire arc, and I don't think people give it enough credit. On the surface it's just Xu Huirong's simple wedding — red shirt, plastic flower, a speech from some factory secretary — but it's actually doing SO much narrative heavy lifting. It's the catalyst that makes Jiang Wanwan actually sit down and think about her own relationship with Shen Tingjun. Without that wedding, she'd probably still be coasting through this fake-dating arrangement. The author uses someone else's milestone to force the protagonist into a crisis, which is classic but executed really well here.
Then you have the wedding planning conversation that follows, and it's hilarious because Shen Tingjun is planning a jeep procession and a state restaurant feast while Jiang Wanwan is over here like 'what if we wait ten years?' The contrast between his urgency and her detachment tells you everything about where they are emotionally. And then the big moment — 'Do you love me?' — and she says 'I don't know.' My jaw literally dropped. That's such a raw, honest answer that most romance novels would never allow. She's not playing hard to get, she genuinely doesn't know. But then she almost immediately undercuts it by saying she'd kill him if he married someone else, which is... not a great look? Like, is that love or possession? The text itself seems to be asking that question.
The misunderstanding at the end of Chapter 20 is a textbook comedic plot device but it works because the author has built enough tension beforehand. Director Shen walking in on a shirtless man and a girl on the floor with a nosebleed — it's almost too convenient, but the era setting makes it believable. People in this time period had completely different norms about privacy and propriety. And Yao Hongjuan's performance as the 'kind stepmother' while secretly encouraging the beating? That's a character reveal that's going to pay off later. I'm genuinely curious about her endgame.