I love the story and I am at chapter 45 so far which is the latest chapter at the moment, the story is developing pretty good and explanation is great although there are some very small grammar mistakes from time to time it doesn’t affect the quality of the story.
The author tries to make the system look impresive in a very artificial way by means of fake limits and obstacles.There's a limit placed in the spirit points(?) and it's ignored in the same chapter it is introduced.The points are a currency that can be stolen without any effort and completely unnoticed, at least until much later, probably.
In a previous review I criticized the description of the story since it was not very good. However, since then the author has changed the description to be much better. I have deleted my previous review.
I don't know what happen to this but I think there's some changes? Like there's missing chapters that I have read before already? Perhaps, are you making some editing on those chapters? BTW, I'm waiting so please post it soon. ????
I love how the story flows it makes me excited to read it. The synopsis itself just got me like I can say to myself that I really need to read this until the end??Well done author???keep it up
Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story.Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :)I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)
This is is great so far and I hope you don’t drop so fast f you like this story I found another one like it it’s called everybody likes big chest and it’s about a mimic taking over the world one bite trap at a time
So far this novel good points are:1- a Mc with a sassy personality2- a Mc with a sister complex even so the sister is not in the novel, she had mentioned the sister so much that I wonder if she got trap in the alternative world by her sister3- another novel with an AI system so those are funBad points of this novel1- the world the MC travelled is soooo boring, I feel sleep reading because of it, I hope in new chapters something really interesting will happens2- the Mc thought are really redundant so after saying all this I added it to my library ? I have the feeling I will be pleasantly surprise ... I will give it a try
