Reborn as the Lord of Goddesses - Reviews

The small girl crept out of her parents room she wore a soft pink princess dress that fell just below her knees in one hand she held a small grey teddy bear who was missing an eye from many long years in the small childs home the other hand clutched tightly to a small handgun

"5-PATH SWORDSMANSHIP"[NON-ELEMENTAL SCHOOL] lv 2

"Hello" he said in a formal tone "I am Romel Johnson. I will be your commanding officer starting today. I expect you all to follow my orders to the letter"

I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.:)

The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit:The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move.The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.

LECTOR IS SO COOL ( LIKE MAGE ASSASSIN)