Writing quality: Very good grammar, it is good to see new books with good grammar on Webnovel, really like it
Story development: The story starts interesting and I, what a suprise, like it. She grows stronger and can evolve, to that is the system no stupid cheat which makes her op.
Character design: She is a normal typical girl, a bit crazy sometimes when she sees beautiful people but cold when needed, which I truly like on her
Update stability: 2 chapters a day is very good, a mass release was there a while ago too, so 5 stars, nothing else wouldnt make sense
World background: Nothing much yet is known, but the story doesnt even have 100 chapters yet, but it is promising
( Is she in Tensura? )
My personal opinion: I like that there is a fmc which isn't the same cliche one, it is refreshing, with her growing party members which I hope won't be that big( cannon fodder not included), loved how she handled her first noble, hope that that with her brother won't be something stupid,
Good luck with the story
