Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System - Reviews

Author here, please check this new book out.

The concept is very cool and the update schedule is cool...but the thing that ruins it for me is the lack of soul in the story(chat gpt story),it's very robotic which makes the story boring and ruins the immersion .The world building aspect is very limited since we see it from the black dragon,so far the actions of the Mc haven't really done anything to affect his surrounding especially his appetite (like how does the blue dragon handle this minor food shortage ,how do the elves feel about this etc).
I'm at the chapter before it gets locked and that's all the bad things so far,especially the robotic feel of the story

great book can't wait for more chapter, love the dragons

I enjoyed this book at the start. Especially the interactions Bruce had with his siblings and his mother but as I continued reading, this story was reduced to the author using so many descriptive words to describe every little thing that happened while he neglected the need to put in more dialogue and make the characters interesting. I’m truly disappointed. For some reason I feel like this is written by AI instead of a human with a soul.

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This is GOLD. Small mistakes in Grammer, but gold otherwise. It's hard to find such novels with amazing storyline.

I like the story very much can't wait for more