Hmm, this was a very odd novel to read. We are given the background that the MC is someone who is slightly insane/unhinged. Or at least, should be. But reading through I realized the author has no idea how to convey this. Show, don't tell. Never once does the MC seem crazy to me. He is called crazy but that's it. The fact that he wanted the ML to die in arc 1 doesn't make him crazy. The character doesn't behave like his set-up at all, which makes the entire thing meaningless. None of the character's are interesting either which is a shame because I could see some get really intriguing.
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CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHAPTERS FREE BECAUSE I DONT HAVE MUCH FREE PASS BUDDY AND I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL...so can you free this novel since it's have potential and many readers will leave because of this
seriously up there with Lord of mysteries and vampire system. I can't tell what's going to happen next it's a one of a kind boom even though it has classic tropes like a system and isekai give it a shot your not going to regret picking this up.
from the start the mc starts acting like an idiot, stopping to think in battle about which cool lines to say, the system prompts are way to annoying repeating the same thing over and over, i quit there
"No no nothing so. It's a secret. between you and me and no third wheel should know this.". Grandma is serious. They ask wondered what she is up to. But Fred agreed wholeheartedly.
